rough draft

Hello my fellow classmates i have been working very hard on my rough draft although i finally finished it and turned it in to the writing center about a week ago and i have not recieved any response back from them at all, i have sent a couple of e-mails pertaining to this matter but still no repsonse, they say from 48 to 72 hours so maybe i will here something this week, my problem is grammar and sentences running into each other i've gotten a little better but i could use some help on that note. I chose this topic because i have this condition and the more you learn about your condtion the better you will understand it.