rough draft

Hello my fellow classmates i have been working very hard on my rough draft although i finally finished it and turned it in to the writing center about a week ago and i have not recieved any response back from them at all, i have sent a couple of e-mails pertaining to this matter but still no repsonse, they say from 48 to 72 hours so maybe i will here something this week, my problem is grammar and sentences running into each other i've gotten a little better but i could use some help on that note. I chose this topic because i have this condition and the more you learn about your condtion the better you will understand it.

Their is so much to considered in writing papers, such as what is the main point,which audience
do i address also you must watch your grammar, quotations, and most of all you must cite all papers, credit should be given for the individuals hard work. one of my professor's would always say when you are in doubt, cite it because it's always better to have lot's of citations than not to have enough and get charged with plagirism